I found this well-written and important essay in one of the classrooms I was working today at the high school where I work that has summer school:
Drugs and the usage of some drugs should be legal.
The usage of some drugs should be legal because some help kids focus better in school, they help you relax, and they let you have a good time.
Some drugs, like weed, help kids focus more. If weed was legal, and the kids who focus more while on weed did it, test scores for some schools would go up 69% percent.
If some drugs were legal, like pot, much more people would be relaxed, and layed back. There wouldn't be as many stressed people in the world currently.
Pot should be one of these legal drugs because it helps you have fun.
Some drugs should be legal because some drugs help kids focus, help relax, and let you have a good time.
5 comments:
no. only pot OR weed should be legal. but not both. definitely not both.
excellent argument. some drugs, some people, some test scores. some deal, I say.
i wonder if the writer has ever smoked pot before.
Not only does weed help people to focus, it helps them to create complex arguments. Because if people are relaxed, then they can focus more and create more complex arguments.
Besides, some drugs should be legal, because they help people to focus enough to make complex arguments that are very focused without repeating themselves.
This IS important and well-written. But I find myself wondering how the writer feels about legalizing marijuana.
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